Post by A on Jan 17, 2010 18:53:37 GMT -5
Another thing I had to write for school. This one let me have more room to breathe, so I was able to actually write something I like. Even though it's not long at all (short at under 500 words), I had fun writing it.
It's just a story about three people who are tied to one story, and it shows each person's side. I really like this concept and may continue this story.
I would love it if you/all/someone could tell me if it would be too confusing to continue the story in three parts...
Thanks. ^^
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Several Sides To Every Story
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Kahlin~~
I was outside talking to my amazing boyfriend Storm. He asked me if I wanted to go on a date the next day, to the movies, and of course I said yes. I mean, how could I not? His gorgeous green eyes just forced me to! Gosh, he’s amazing. So I put my hand on his chest, got on my tip-toes and was about to kiss him, when I heard the back-door to my house open. I turned around and saw Carter. He stood there for just a moment, when he turned and started walking to the front of my house. I could tell that he was hurt, I mean, even though Carter and I aren’t together, it's weird kissing or being close to someone else in front of him. Anyway, so I dropped back down to the soles of my feet and ran to him. I grabbed his arm and started to apologize frantically. He said that it was fine, but I could tell by the look on his face, and in his eyes, that it wasn’t. And it was killing me.
Storm~~
I was outside with Kahlin. I asked her if she wanted to go to the movies with me the next day, and she said yes. She was about to kiss me when Carter came outside and saw us. He looked at us and then started to walk away. I could tell that Kahlin felt bad about kissing me in front of him because she glanced at me with a sad expression, and then ran to Carter. At that exact moment I knew that she wasn’t just in love with me, but that she also had a soft spot for Carter, even if she didn’t know it, I could easily tell. She grabbed his arm and was saying something to him, but I didn’t know what because I was too far away. After seeing that, I knew that I would have to work, hard, to win her heart. All of it.
Carter~~
I was at Kahlin’s party, but not feeling it, so I decided that I’d just go outside to be by myself for a short while before I left. As soon as I walked out the back door I saw Kahlin and Storm kissing. I know that Kahlin and I aren’t together, but I just feel nervous about any guy kissing her. I don’t want her to get hurt, if you know what I mean. So anyway, I knew it wouldn’t be right to interfere with her personal life, so I kept my mouth shut and started walking toward the front of the house, when someone grabbed a hold of my arm. I turned around and saw that it was Kahlin. She apologized, and apologized, and kept apologizing. I just continued to keep my mouth shut, I didn’t know what to say. Then she asked me if I was alright, and I said yes of course, I said that I was fine. But really I wasn’t.
It's just a story about three people who are tied to one story, and it shows each person's side. I really like this concept and may continue this story.
I would love it if you/all/someone could tell me if it would be too confusing to continue the story in three parts...
Thanks. ^^
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Several Sides To Every Story
~
Kahlin~~
I was outside talking to my amazing boyfriend Storm. He asked me if I wanted to go on a date the next day, to the movies, and of course I said yes. I mean, how could I not? His gorgeous green eyes just forced me to! Gosh, he’s amazing. So I put my hand on his chest, got on my tip-toes and was about to kiss him, when I heard the back-door to my house open. I turned around and saw Carter. He stood there for just a moment, when he turned and started walking to the front of my house. I could tell that he was hurt, I mean, even though Carter and I aren’t together, it's weird kissing or being close to someone else in front of him. Anyway, so I dropped back down to the soles of my feet and ran to him. I grabbed his arm and started to apologize frantically. He said that it was fine, but I could tell by the look on his face, and in his eyes, that it wasn’t. And it was killing me.
Storm~~
I was outside with Kahlin. I asked her if she wanted to go to the movies with me the next day, and she said yes. She was about to kiss me when Carter came outside and saw us. He looked at us and then started to walk away. I could tell that Kahlin felt bad about kissing me in front of him because she glanced at me with a sad expression, and then ran to Carter. At that exact moment I knew that she wasn’t just in love with me, but that she also had a soft spot for Carter, even if she didn’t know it, I could easily tell. She grabbed his arm and was saying something to him, but I didn’t know what because I was too far away. After seeing that, I knew that I would have to work, hard, to win her heart. All of it.
Carter~~
I was at Kahlin’s party, but not feeling it, so I decided that I’d just go outside to be by myself for a short while before I left. As soon as I walked out the back door I saw Kahlin and Storm kissing. I know that Kahlin and I aren’t together, but I just feel nervous about any guy kissing her. I don’t want her to get hurt, if you know what I mean. So anyway, I knew it wouldn’t be right to interfere with her personal life, so I kept my mouth shut and started walking toward the front of the house, when someone grabbed a hold of my arm. I turned around and saw that it was Kahlin. She apologized, and apologized, and kept apologizing. I just continued to keep my mouth shut, I didn’t know what to say. Then she asked me if I was alright, and I said yes of course, I said that I was fine. But really I wasn’t.